Beware Of Repetition

Beware Of Repetition

Get right to your point argument when it comes to the benefits so it’s the benefit all that stuff is extra the main benefit of co-education is the varied social interactions allow students to interact with all types of people varied social interactions that these students may meet in society the students may experience okay so I went from in the first one I had students I think twice there and the second the last one I had it once pronouns squeezing things together verbs get rid of unnecessary words don’t have the build up don’t have the setup to your point just get to the point as quickly as possible 34:14 in the middle I just cut out a few other words to show you the gradual steps you can read that on your own now redundancy and repetition. Find out how to check your work for repetition at Robotdon.

Say it once say it clearly move on to other things there’s no need to repeat any ideas you’ve already said because the reader understood them why are you telling me again I understood you the first time you’re just wasting my time by telling me the same thing again or you might think I’m not smart enough to understand so you have to say it again that the impression readers get from redundancy and repetition one benefit of owning your own home is that you have control over the property that you pay for with your hard-earned money in other words you make all the decisions about what to do with or to your house so owning your own home property that you pay for with your hard-earned money that’s the exact same thing owning your own home means you pay for it you don’t need to tell me that you pay for it with your hard-earned money and if you own your home means you pay for it if you pay for it it means you use money and if you use money it’s money that you work for so all that extra stuff is unnecessary you’re basically saying the same thing again using different words but saying the same thing and then in other words now you’re going to explain it even more and again.

So you make all the decisions about squeeze all that together get rid of the extra stuff that’s not adding any information one benefit of owning your own home is you can make all the decisions about what to do with or to it and you don’t have to say your house it pronoun owning your own home once you make the decisions that’s all there is to say only keep the information that is adding always add information add information keep the idea keep the argument moving forward at all times okay now when it comes to redundancy this is the most common example for those of you taking the aisle to a TOEFL test and this is the one that you have to be most careful about to eliminate in my opinion I believe that well if you’re introducing your opinion then that’s your opinion.

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